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I, Too

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I, Too, Sing America.
Yet it is I
that is off fighting your war.
Today
I face the smile of Death.
And yet it is I,
still holding your gun
in a war,
fighting for something none of us
believe.
It is my gun
that sings
America, home of the brave.
And you sit
smiling at your friends in the safety
of your own home


But we continue to fight.
We will continue
for you, America.
And we continue to hold
our colors, with pride.
And when we come home,
if we do,
You will greet us with a smile,
and you will offer your hand
with a shake
and a false face.
And while our mothers weep
you share no tears.
But you will realize,
when I'm dead,
that
I, too, am America.

An Acc. Eng. 10 assignment that was based off of Langston Hughes' "I, Too, Sing America". There were very few guides. First and last lines were set, had to be over 10 lines. Mine was 33 or so. xD


I'm not much of a poet.
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WolfGurl1020's avatar
I really love this. I searched Hughes' poem because I had to write one myself, but yours is truly beautiful. I hope that mine turns out well enough :)
Thanks for the inspiration!